i think the face looks good. it's eerie. i like the details, the equipment, the weapon. i do feel that he looks too human. the tolmekian soldiers seemed subhuman and, though somewhat scary, also kind of clumsy. yours looks too cunning and respectable.
thanks for the comment! I was trying to keep him humanize when designing him. I guess I did want them to be soldiers that deserves to be behind Lady Kushana, and that's why I ended up choosing to not make them look too clumsy. but yea it might also be a good idea to have kept that too. I'll continue working on it too.